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Do you see the pretty colors,
masterpieces yet to be born.
Imagination full of wonders
on a sheet just freshly torn.

Create a piece so wonderous,
to stand the strain of time.
A collection of great colors
without any reason, need, or rhyme.

Molding a world of freedom
with the colors on a palette.
The brushes may be the actors
emotions that only paint can display

A world free of pain and sorrow
will be born between the lines.
Fingers dance across a keyboard
poetry shall never be confined.

A broken heart is mended
with just a dash of red.
A lonely desert replenished
as the blues help it be fed.

A voice is in these paintings,
they sing words yet to be spoken.
Bring light into the darkness
for those who have yet to be awoken.

Art is refuge and expression
the key to chains we bare.
The escape from dull reality
no matter how its shared.
a silly poem. might scrap it, undecided. honestly, Art is expression. Its how we let others know what we feel and think. Its always said that a picture is worth a thousand words. Well on a site like Deviantart, we can be heard loud and clear! :) own up to your art don't ever stop. keep drawing, writing, acting, singing, taking photos. whatever your art is embrace it. *gets off imaginary soap box*

as always critiques are always welcome as are comments! thanks guys! :)
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
As with so many poems i have read, many from writers who have joined my groups, the rhyme is very apt. And you seem to enjoy changing the patern from a-b-c-b to abab. That shows or reflects mood and content both. What i would warn is that the expression or tone appears a bit egotistic, especially from stanza2, but the general expression is modest enough. Perhaps rather than saying point blank that you will create wonderful art, endeavor to describe such a work. Showing is usually better than telling. Otherwise, the poem was well-written and shows good form and atention to style.
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Artsysnowflake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  New member Student General Artist
It was beautiful, I loved how you mentioned actors. We're artists too, just a different kind of artist. Thanks :-)
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miyu713 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Art is not defined by just pencils and paper! :D So gotta love everyone's art! 
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Artsysnowflake Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Exactly! :D
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
poetry shall never be confined. :heart:
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