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I am the master of my destiny
No one shall carve my way but I.
I am the leader of my dreams
I am responsible if I live or die.

I am the creator of my madness,
the father of my desperation.
The maker of my fears
the fuel to self-made validation.

I reap my own rewards
for the work I have completed
the one broken and forlorn
when my riches were depleted.

I am the prophet of my beliefs
choosing which way to follow
The compass of my morals
I'm to blame if I'm hollow.

I am the keeper of my pride
for the good deeds I claim to give.
The martyr at my own cross
for the way I chose to live.

I am the maker of my destiny,
no one shall carve my way but me
I have control of my actions
for I chose to be kept free.
A simple poem about what life is, and how exactly it is meant to be lived. In my opinion at least.

Feel free to interpret as you will. Critiques and Advice is always welcome. Also many many troubles with the title. If you have a good suggestion I am all ears! :3
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archseer Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
hear hear! nicely done :)
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love it. dos not fit the title. and sorry for the late comment. but the title dos not fit the poem.

i might say the controller of my own fate or life would sound better as a tittle i think.

i'm no critique. But will say. personally i think you did a great job on this. how what you do is not what someone or something tells you to do. but you who controls what you do yourself. but that what i interpret from this. i don't know if i'm close to the meaning of the poem. if at all.
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Adam-2-Angelz Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
This reminds me of my life right now and the battles I face in college. :heart:
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miyu713 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good luck sweetheart with college, I feel your pain! :) and thank you for the nice comment!
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Adam-2-Angelz Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
...:hug: + :heart:
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miyu713 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)hope you had a good valentine's day! :)
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Adam-2-Angelz Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
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Zireael07 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliant!
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miyu713 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :)
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LFBeta16 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013   General Artist
I'm not very good when it comes to poetry, but this is a well done piece. Great job! ^^b
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